it’s tempting to crowd
words together cleverly,
like too many empty people
rushing japanese subway cars,
each line hand-packed
with metaphors, yet
signifying nothing.
on the other hand
it’s difficult to manipulate
the fewest words needed to create
work through which an artist might
pass unheeded -- in control but not
commanding, heard but never seen --
the hand of god invisibly
doing its accidental thing.
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Incredible!
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